Free !!

I walk around aimlessly
overshadowded by my own mysery
I seem to be quite and settled
The mirror reflects, what you are not
The guy inside is restless
Finding questions to answers unheld
shouting prayers to wishes unheard
Trapped in detrimental rights and pleasurable wrongs
Only if the Head would witness a BIG BANG
and all would be scattered in directions unknown
Let different thoughts build their own mansion
Thus might end the war of making a choice ..
And I would be free as ever
one Soul !!
9 Comments:
nice poem,
Thanks for ur lovely comment.
"Only if the Head would witness a BIG BANG
and all would be scattered in directions unknown
Let different thoughts build their own mansion
Thus might end the war of making a choice .. "
Love these words.
I can totally relate to your poem.
@ princess : thnk you .. your highness !! :)
@ [a} : a lil more poetic :
It feels good to know
people like me do exist
some who could feel & relate
same as the way I twist
Should I confirm I am not alone
In this mist of darkness
Should be happy and lay back
Assured a hand would touch my innocence
you love my lines
I love yours
But yet ve behave
Like Enemy behind those lines ..
- anuj . ( hehe .. stupid )
lol!
:D
making a choice should not be a war, if u know wut u want :)
Keshi.
@ keshi :: you dont get what u desire .. so in d end you have to mould ur desires .. which is not desired ..
so its all fucked up in d end ..
;)
hi
when I read the poem some of the lines are just describes my life these days...
TC
Suryan
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@ suryan :: well .. most of our lives r quite cross - sectional ..
thnk u fr visitib d blog !!
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