On the first cold day ..
For those moments of hapiness
u feel blessed
In those moments of ecstacy
u touch the crest
On the waves of ecitement
U surf
Along the winds of cold mountain
U whisper to ur heart
On the hurricanes of pleasure
u set ur ground
On those lovely music tunes
u move around ....
U shiver with the cold breeze
holding on to oneself tight
But its not oneself whom u feel
its some one hugging ur zeal
Those words of care entice u
U flatter on that simple smile
In Her actions of stupidity
U feel thy charm
U lend ur ears for all those babbles
U dont understand a word yet u dont toggle
U wont say a word to let her talk
On those winters when close she walks
U look in her eyes to read
her desires, love & feelings
she is all u need
for all ur healings
Confused to hold her in arms
Astonished with her charm
U try to make her giggle
It is her whom u tickle !!
U express your Love
U shower all the care
and u utter those words ....
But then ....
Lightning strikes in ur head
U wake up all perplexed
A smile on ur lips
the confusion up ahead
The dream is gone
you are back in to the world ....
the similar world .. the similar world ..
But yet U complete the unsaid ..
For wht .. For wht ?? May be just in cae
Just in case of what ?? .. JUST IN CASE OF LIFE
With those unopened eyes .. though they r bright with hope
With those fractured lips .. though they manage to put up a smile
with cluttered hairs and accompanied by a yawn ..
you utter .. " YOU ARE THE BEST THING THAT EVER HAPPENED TO MY LIFE "
PS :: I wrote this on the first cold day :D . Isnt this great u dont hav any idea whom ur saying this to .. but saying that to the air around u gives a kind of peace .. cause one day the wind will take away that air far far away with it .. close to her ears & whisper .. " YOU ARE THE ... " .. and for a moment she will smile. And not knowing who that she is .. is the fun of the game called LIFE
radiohead signed off at 9:15 AM
7 Comments:
Wohoho!! That was some poem! Somebody's feelin romantic! ;)
if this was on the first day of winter....many more must be comin....chalo winter holds somethin good
I cannot say that I like winter. I don't hate it. But it reminds me of all good things must come to an end, even the weariest of river must wind down somewhere into the sea. The day must give way to the night, and the light to the dark. Winter represents the beginning of the end, the completion of one cycle on the wheel of time. It always make me feel sad and melancholy.
But as your poem, I sure have faith that the wind will carry it far and wide to those who will hearken to you.
anuj yaar i loved it... it ws awesome...hey! i hp u ddint read my mind;-)
n yea winters r so romantic..
@ mirage :: yups megha .. winter is so romantic .. presently my fingers r freezin .. and they r resistin writing anything .... but evn then its a great feelin ... i jst love winter.
@ dhruv :: lol .. by first cold day i meant a few dayz back ... hehehe for me the winter has jst started ....
@ johney :: i like winter a lot johney.
and hey u wrote some great lines there. And yups even i hope the winds to carry forth the messg of luv :D
@ Milo :: did I ?? may be yups ;) .... hehe actually wht happens is tht u dont knw it but u start feelin wht ur friends feel .... so i might not hav read ur mind .. but we hav d same feelings .. hehe hoon na main ek acha friend :D . And apko pasand ayi bas mere liye to itna hi kafi hai ;) . cya . tc .
@ shveta :: Fishy .. hehehe .. wht do u expect frm a hopeless romantic :D . hehe i m romantic .. now r u kiddin ?? agar nahi to kya compliment diya hai .. hehehe
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