you & me (incomplete)
clasped in thy arms of lonliness
buckled with the emptiness within
frozen among the cold blue wind
waiting for you to pull me out ..
tangled up in this web of life
trapped in sudden twists nd turns therein
fighting those extinct tears
waiting for you to hush me up ..
wrecked, broken with ruthless blows
scattered like millions of pieces
striving to put together whats left within
longing to be pampered lots ...
Am I holding on to u too tight
Havent i been waiting for u since long
It seems u wont come, it seems u might
Me, jinxed by a confusion of my own ....
buckled with the emptiness within
frozen among the cold blue wind
waiting for you to pull me out ..
tangled up in this web of life
trapped in sudden twists nd turns therein
fighting those extinct tears
waiting for you to hush me up ..
wrecked, broken with ruthless blows
scattered like millions of pieces
striving to put together whats left within
longing to be pampered lots ...
Am I holding on to u too tight
Havent i been waiting for u since long
It seems u wont come, it seems u might
Me, jinxed by a confusion of my own ....
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24 Comments:
And I hope you find that YOU soon Anuj :)
Keshi.
hey .. its jst an expression of some hidden emotion .. a moment of solance ...
hehe ... no demands in particular :p ..... me nt on a gal-hunt exactly ;)
but yups .. in the shades of time, will catch up to hold someones arm ( ** aint i gettin better n better in this stupidity :D )
nd u its written INCOMPLETE .. cause it is ... i wrote one more para one day .. will post it thr soon ....
here it is ::
wrecked, broken with ruthless blows
scattered like millions of pieces
striving to put together whats left within
longing to be pampered lots ...
hey !
thanx for stopping by !
u do write very nice lines ... keep writing ! tc
i liked the ones above more than the ones on ur post
@ deepa :: thankx a lot deepa .. thnkx fr the encouragement .. nd the lines above are an extension of the lines in the post .. its written in the title (incomplete ... nd i guess it still is .. ) . kkeep visiting .
pampering!! ;-) hmmm
hmmm...dude noone caln hush u up or pull u out except urself...!
@ milo : spot on !! i nevr knew u understnd me so well :P .. or may be my writing .. hehehhe ... thnkx & tc .
@ anand :: indeed !! very very true .. bt if we cud have been strong enuf .. we wudnt have shattered at all .. ( WE asin talkin abt ppl as a whole )
:) feeling pameres is the most satisfying feeling in this whole world..
nice lines..
NICE!
I loved the first part...waiting for you to pull me out NICE!!! :D
**me nt on a gal-hunt exactly
I didnt necessarily mean a gal by the term 'YOU' :)
Keshi.
"fighting those extinct tears"...
extinct..tears...u really think it's extinct,or it's there inside..whcih is worse to hold up so tight inside,only to hide....
anyways,u write really really well.
i particularly likes this line...r u holdin up smthin too???
hahahahahaha
@ kishley : thnkx buddy !!
@ rohit : thnkx buddy .. js comes frm inside ;)
@ keshi : hmmm ....
@ anjalika : yups quite true .. nd thnkx for appreciating buds ;) ..
yups m holding a lot :P
hi anuj,
very nicely written..
any one fall in love with these words n i think ofcourse with u also...
just take care
-shruti
@ shruti : falling for the words is ohk .. justified as well .... bt in ne case .. with the most rare possibilty .. r u falling for me ?:P
hehehehehehe ....
nd sure will tc .. u take care too ;)
hi buddy..
well ya me falling with ur words.
nn with u rare possibility...
how truely u guess dear..
take care
see ya.
@ shruti : hmm .. my guesses r fine .. normally :D . cya .
They say the fruit of patience is the sweetest. One day she will surely come to you. And that day, we shall see if it is the sweetest.
@ johney :: ya sure .. lemme wait fr tht day :D .... till thn i will make arrangements for my survival in this PIT :P . nd thnkx .
Hey beautiful poem...guess we always do look for that one person to embrace us and take away our fears an pain!...Hope u dont have to wait long for that one person!:-)
@ ekta : thnkx dear ..
my gaawd .. ppl might think m in a pathetic state .. really lookin out for someone .. i mean desperately .. which is neva d case ..
bt ya u do need someone u pull u out .. ;) ..
Nice work! Reading through your archives for more nuggets like this one...
Check out my poetry blog when you get a chance:
http://meaning-and-balance.blogspot.com
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