you will never know what I wanted
Cause I wont let you ever know
you figure out the dummy desires
Cause I will pose them to be
you will consider me to be rude
Cause I will be the guy who ignores
Friends would say that I am lucky
Cause I will hide the sores
I will never be forgotten .. Is it?
I will fade away for the better
Cause darkness would engross my being
Cause, to you I would be unseen
I would be lost in some memoirs
like songs you heard in past
I would pass away in smoke
like ash, I would fall down nd break ..
6 Comments:
you write so well,
nice poem.
@ princess :: Thank you again .. ur highness :P
wow just too good!
Keshi.
@ keshi : Thankx MATE :P
"I would pass away in smoke"
.....thts wht happens when kids like u smoke a lot :P....hehe..just kidding..
i just can say this...BRILLIANT...but write something on love too explicitly also..i miss d hopeless romantic on d blog :)
@ desperado : dude this was one of those hopeless moments divulged in to words .. so hopeless is still thr .. ya not so romantic .. ;)
as per my personal preferences ..
I loved d second line d most :
" Like Ash, I would fall down and break" ..
I mean almost all d time we give tht shit importance to smoke .. jst bcause it rises above our eyes nd moreover cause it has tht power to escape .. think of d pitiful ash .. all it can do it fall down .. shatter in to peices nd moreover being crisped by a no of feet .. thts so touching .. isnt it ??
:)
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