once u said u care ..
With my eyes closed
my heart searching for solace
I twist & turn on my bed
As if thats not my place
someone teasing me in dream
reaching close & than running far
helpless !! I could only scream
still no ones there to read that scar
I wonder why did i chose pain
When I knew all wud go in vain
Its just like a window pane
one can see through, yet its unknown !!
you lend me just a finger
standing on the edge , left unsure
should I hold ur hand & linger
Or should I let go & fall obscure ....
help me baby, am in dispair
help me baby , help me .. once u said u care .....
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14 Comments:
nice piece of writing....
well I only want to say that just feel the passion of your feelings, give them freedom, don't try to suppress them.....
beautiful writing...
let go..it's the biggest freedom...
Keshi.
hmm.
touches the heart.
touches a heartbeat.
@ in search :: thnkx for d visit & thkx for d advice .
@ keshi :: if i will let go thn what do i have to hold on to ?? i guess these r the only things I hav .. the bare minimum .... though letting go wud lead me to peace .. but who wants peace .. CHAOS is a better treasure :D.
@ ajay :: thnkx . well i did mine while writing .. nd if it did ur while reading .. its worth it :) .
Nice one..
Sorry.. haven't been leaving too many comments recently.
Anyways..got work for you..
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I agree...but...:)
** if i will let go thn what do i have to hold on to
do u always want to be safe? Holding onto something?
** but who wants peace .. CHAOS is a better treasure
If u dun get peace from holding on, then what's the point :)
Keshi.
@ anchal :: hey buddy , long time han . ya sure will do it .. but aftr some time :D .
@ keshi :: well not exactly .. but whn u knw tht this is wht u evr wanted .. nd u knw tht to get things tht u have always desired for u gottta face all sorta problms ... so shudnt i hold on ... cause this is the only opportunity that i have got ( AS EMINEM says it ) ::: SUCCESS IS MY ONLY FUCKING OPTION .. FAILURES NOT ....... so i guess its not abt feeling safe .. its abt holding on to things jst bcause these r d things tht u alwyz wanted .
and hey thnkx 4 all these sweet cmnts :D .
You gotta help urself buddy... maybe those promises made were hollow...
Take care
"once u said u care"
........ if u gotta remind the person abt this then its better to let go.....but still sometimes all the sane advice seems so stupid...so buddy just enjoy and do wht u want
@ mirage :: are mitr .. tension not .. its not of tht sort .. jst some unexpressed feelings yaar ... some untouched emotions . wry not .. evrythngs fine . and thnkx for being there .
@ dhruv :: thnkx buddy .
**u knw tht to get things tht u have always desired for u gottta face all sorta problms
agreed and gotcha this time ;-)
Keshi.
great piece anuj!
*I wonder why did i chose pain
When I knew all wud go in vain *...
Aha the sad story of the lost love...
@ keshi :: thnkx buddy .
@ monks :: hey dude thnkx a lot .
@ anand :: thnkx for d visit man . do keep a vigil here :D . nd its not d sad story of a lostlove .. but its jst certain expression of a feeling hidden inside .
lovely
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