TAgged again !!
This ones by Anchal . Hav to write a 55 words rhyming story . Now this sounds a bit scary. Hav written some poems [ good or bad donno ] but this ones scary. Its not tht i wont love to do it .. its great but the scary part is d word limit .. if things doesnt work out u dont feel like writing but if its goin good & u feel gud abt wht ur writin then the word limit suks .
Hey anchal , dont blame me now .. i asked u in a comment .. no replies till now [ u see how busy a wella can get .. hehe ] so i m postin it finally breakin the 55 word rule & moreover i managed 2 of them [ when it comes to written crap .. all u can do is to comeup with more of it ;) ]. And why i say this .. cause i m scared of tht DHAMKI there .. GAAA WD !! :D
So here it is :
I . Ahh .. this damn world
They had walked hand in hand
Along the sea, on the sand ...
They were great, very adorable
Lovely & always there for one another ..
They surfed on the waves of passion
Made love .. compassion was there expression
Feelings were all they cared for
which day by day became intense more
They decided to marry & live happily ever after
To face the damn world together ..
But fate as usual was hard
Destiny hadnt allowed a marriage card ..
[ parents against ..
..
.......... listenin this they didnt faint ]
One usual day they went up the hill
Sang to each other JACK & JILL
Passionately kissed one another
Jumped together hand in hand
and lived happily ever after for eternity !!
II . Love - too heavy to sail [ titanic ]
On the deck he saw her
Wearing a coat of fur ..
She was as beautiful as the moon
As if she jst came out of the cocoon
He had never thought of such a strange meeting
He saved her from falling over the railing
still they were strangers
very much the strangers
But the moments swayed them close
And he was in love with ROSE
he showed her the world she always longed for
and it was then that she falled for him more
Even the huge ship couldnt bear such heavy love
and ran in to an iceberg below & above
It was due to sink & go down
As if the SEA wanted that big a crown
They went down together
Hand in hand .. promising to love forever
the lil boy saved her again .. a true lover
they were apart .. but she didnt forget him ever
Thats what love is .. settin the other free
And it is then that one says " YOU R NOT YOU .. YOU R ME "
Now comes d real thing . I m gonna tag five people now .... hahaha [ devil ]
1. DHRUV
2. MANLEEN
3. MEGHA
4. ILLETRATE SNEHA [ she is kiddin .. she knows a hell lot .. hehe ]
5. ROHIT TALWAR
SO get on d job buddy .. and nothin like .. i m not gonna do it .. come on be sporty :D .
Hey anchal , dont blame me now .. i asked u in a comment .. no replies till now [ u see how busy a wella can get .. hehe ] so i m postin it finally breakin the 55 word rule & moreover i managed 2 of them [ when it comes to written crap .. all u can do is to comeup with more of it ;) ]. And why i say this .. cause i m scared of tht DHAMKI there .. GAAA WD !! :D
So here it is :
I . Ahh .. this damn world
They had walked hand in hand
Along the sea, on the sand ...
They were great, very adorable
Lovely & always there for one another ..
They surfed on the waves of passion
Made love .. compassion was there expression
Feelings were all they cared for
which day by day became intense more
They decided to marry & live happily ever after
To face the damn world together ..
But fate as usual was hard
Destiny hadnt allowed a marriage card ..
[ parents against ..
..
.......... listenin this they didnt faint ]
One usual day they went up the hill
Sang to each other JACK & JILL
Passionately kissed one another
Jumped together hand in hand
and lived happily ever after for eternity !!
II . Love - too heavy to sail [ titanic ]
On the deck he saw her
Wearing a coat of fur ..
She was as beautiful as the moon
As if she jst came out of the cocoon
He had never thought of such a strange meeting
He saved her from falling over the railing
still they were strangers
very much the strangers
But the moments swayed them close
And he was in love with ROSE
he showed her the world she always longed for
and it was then that she falled for him more
Even the huge ship couldnt bear such heavy love
and ran in to an iceberg below & above
It was due to sink & go down
As if the SEA wanted that big a crown
They went down together
Hand in hand .. promising to love forever
the lil boy saved her again .. a true lover
they were apart .. but she didnt forget him ever
Thats what love is .. settin the other free
And it is then that one says " YOU R NOT YOU .. YOU R ME "
Now comes d real thing . I m gonna tag five people now .... hahaha [ devil ]
1. DHRUV
2. MANLEEN
3. MEGHA
4. ILLETRATE SNEHA [ she is kiddin .. she knows a hell lot .. hehe ]
5. ROHIT TALWAR
SO get on d job buddy .. and nothin like .. i m not gonna do it .. come on be sporty :D .
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30 Comments:
dude! this is bad!! i'll try but i suck at rhyming... :-|
man! it ws funny.. nice attempt..shows dat it bcms difficult wen u havta cope up wid da wrd limit;-)
"One usual day they went up the hill
Sang to each other JACK & JILL "
lols...but a nice post.
@ rohit : try man try .... TRY TRY AGAIN !! and i knw u will come up with a better stuff then whts here .. so best of luk ;)
@ milo :: lolz .. funny .. hmm . Hey dont ya knw .. lovers do tht .. they evn sing twinkle twinkle
TWINKLE TWINKLE LITTLE STAR
DO U KNW HOW BEAUTIFUL YOU ARE
THE STARS ARE FAR BUT YOU ARE AT PAR
MORE ELEGANT THAN ANY CAR
MORE DESTRUCTIVE THAN ANY WAR
MORE ADDICTIVE THAN ANY BAR
MORE ENIGMATIC
AND I HATE IT WHEN UR FAR
SO U SEE ....
oh my my!! It ws ...well wat do i say?
twinkle twinkle little star,
i must cm n put ur gale mein har,
hw spontaneuosly u cm up wid such stuff bar bar,
tum hamesha prove kar hi dete ho ki tum ho romantic mere yar;-)lols
Hahahahah
mast mast mast!
damn world waali mast likhe hai be!
titanic kee to story malum thee isliye suspense hee nahi raha :D
Lolz @ stories..Nice Nice!
But my lolz were swept away while I reached the end.
Damn you Anuj!
Lolz!
But don't worry.. I'll try my best.
funny anuj at his best i must say...n even better was is the one u came up wid in teh comments sections...
abe sab theek chal raha tha..par tune yeh mujhe tag kyon kar diya..bahut upar jayoge bhaiya (irfan :) )
Oh Man!! Kya mast likhi hai! Even the "twinkle star" one is just too good.
Job well done!! :-D
Word limit..errr...chalo koi baat nahi..itni achhi likhi ki sab compensate ho gaya.
Loved the titanic one...and just ur style "Thats what love is .. settin the other free"
@ milo : great .. great .. jst too gud .. and d answers comin .. jst look for it .
@ mani : are vo to tragic thi .. funny nahin .. ek dukh bhari dastan .. hehe now this is funny !! things tht happen to quite couples these days .. if u hav heard tht song by SUKHVINDER " NASHA HI NASHA HAI " ....
@ sneha :: hehe .. karna to padega hi .. and i m sure u willl come up with a much better one ;)
and i wonder tht all of u r sayin tht this comment ones gud .. pata nahin i jst got it replyin to MILO's comment .... so d credit goes to her .. &
lol see thts how it goes when ur writin stuff seriously it might not be tht gud .. but whn its jst like tht .. it sounds much better :) .
@ dhruv :: abe .. funny nahin .. lol am i a joker .. hehe .. humorous is a better word na .. and sounds gud as well
& u knw wht i m still thinkin abt tht CATCH !! Kya ho sakta hai .. [ scratchin my head ]
@ anchal :: U were the one who tagged me .. so a seperate comment for u :)
chalo tujhe pasand to aya .. & i m happy abt it.
Thats what love is .. settin the other free
han ji PAULO COELHO se to maine yahi sekha hai & i realised this as well .. & thts true .. very true :)
Actually first i wanted to write the titanic one only .. but ended up wid a sad one .. hehe cause thts wht sells
U see this is d irony .. people say tht pain is this & tht .. and it is somethin they enjoy readin a lot .. it sells be it movies or books .. typical human nature haan ;)
And i say it once more i jst loved ur PRACTICAL FILE post .. very innovative .. fundoo ..
@ milo :: Here it is ..
tht was quite an innovation .. nice hindi & angrezi remix .. the flavour of today :D
Its nice to read the way u praised
Its like a toast tht u raised
And its great to know tht i m romantic
But such creatures belong to atlantic !!
The world loves romantics no more
They are termed as total bore
Thats why i hide behind a cosset
And I call myself a hopeless !!
But u knw wht ur a romantic too
In a way that u love a childs boo
And i pray that the world aint against u
And remember i m always there when ur blue !!
Hey thodi si senti + mental hai .. but cudnt come wid a better one ;)
take care .
Wht the....!?? Anuj ke bachhe! You know how much i despise tags, and stil....aarghh! Take pity on a poor sweet little girl...i've probably completed more tags than all the bloggers put together! Mujhe itni badi sazaa kyu!!?
@ mirage :: hehe .. its for all those abuses .. jst kiddin
comeon whts d problm .. u write great poems .. its jst one of them .. & its not tht bad if people demand some simple small things frm u . baki the wish is urs ..
if u drop it down .. bura nahin manoonga .. koi baat nahin . i jst wrote ur name cause ur a friend .
Hey, nice one...u did a good job...
hey anuj
dekhle oye the tag thing
@ the monk :: thnkx dude.
@ rohit :: yups seein it & it was great .. lolz how come u managed it in 55 words . good job ;)
hehehehehehe
good.....very good
tag khatam karne mein majaa aaya,
tht too 55 words rhymingly...mst say,excellent job...lol
ab..milo aur megha ki baari..peetne ke liye,tag se...lol
i mst thnk u....
yipee!!!!
chalo..megha n milo..get on to the work,,,hehehehahhahahaha
666
@ anjalika :: thkx for d praise buddy ;)
yups they r takin too long. Atleast milo was happy to accept it but megha seems furious ..
peetne ke liye ??
Merry Christmas!!
Have fun! Warm wishes your way!
MERRY CHRISTMAS TO ALL . And if u dont have a chimney at home which i suspect none of u wud have .... keep ur doors open .. either u will have ur house full or .. hehe
neways ..
HO HO HO HO !! :D
pretty romantic poems
@ renegade : thnkx man. thnkx for visiting.
@ pradyot :: thkx to u too. dont knw its a comment or a praise or some kinda humour. but as u said true to my name .
oye time to update!
oye time to update!
oye time to update!
hmm, Interesting story and nice rhyming. Keep it up.
@ rohit :: sure man . did tht.
@ johney :: thkx mate.
wah.this was nice!
@ xtremely insane :: thkx .
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