aaaaaaa !!!! is this me ??
After years of hibernation
I finally open my eyes again
The thoughts start running
On some infinite lane
Have things changed ?
As I ponder with a yawn
I know the world hasnt changed much
I sit at the same place where I slept
Physical movement was impossible
But have I moved on .. literally .. intellectually ?
Have I been to some other world in between ??
Indeed .. I procrastinated again !!
I didnt do what was to be done
I didnt undo what had been done !!
Everyone around became perfect
But did I even tried to learn ??
People may have called me a serpent
But did I even hissed ??
There have been moments of ecstacy
But wasnt I lonely ??
There were lots of friends
But werent there enemies ??
Have things changed ?
Or this change U feel , is it an illusion ??
PS :: this peice sounds quite incomplete to me .. but at times certain things look gud if they r left .... incomplete. And may be by doing so .. i got something to ponder upon .
10 Comments:
ME FIRST!
never knew that you could express stuff soo well. lagey raho!
it's very good. do not even try to complete it. it hs the actual ingredient that completion demans, a thought provoking nature.
@ rohit :: are age age dekho hota hai kya ;) .
@ phoenix :: JO hukum !!
@ desperado :: dhnayawad .
A well written peice worthy of the best esteem.
very nice piece.
life is incomplete,so dont worry abt that.
@ johney : thnkx.
@ ms : thkx a lot for droppin by .
good work mate... impressive
life is all about changes!!
smtimes we dont evn realise hw easily we adapt these changes widout givin it a thought .. n smtimes situations n ppl kp changin rite in frnt of us n we remain still..feelin stagnant..
life wont b complete widout d incompletion!!i guess like this it keeps us goin:-)
hey its alright,sometimes u long for imperfection :)
@ explications : thkx mate.
@ milo : wow quite a thing written out there .. someones being philosophical haan .... kyun bhai !! :D
@ xteremely_insane : yups .. but it doesnt hurt if its sometimes .. but thts not d case here .. its been almost always :( . newyzz whr hav u been ?????
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